Hello
Google translate has given me the following translation:
我們特此給您書面通知，於2017年10月31日終止租賃。本通知取代於2017年9月10日發給您的信.
What I want to say is this:
We hereby give you written notice to terminate the tenancy on 31st October 2017. This notice supersedes the letter issued to you on 10th September 2017.
Is the translation correct?
Google translate has given me the following translation:
我們特此給您書面通知，於2017年10月31日終止租賃。本通知取代於2017年9月10日發給您的信.
What I want to say is this:
We hereby give you written notice to terminate the tenancy on 31st October 2017. This notice supersedes the letter issued to you on 10th September 2017.
Is the translation correct?